This photo was taken to show a different take on the stationery that we normally write stories, thoughts and desires upon. With a combination of ink and needles, the flesh becomes the stationery which lasts a lifetime and shows a hint of the owners personality.
Being a huge fan of body art myself I see where you are going with this and I like it. Tattos on many people tell more storys of their life than paper ever will.
The hip does look a little strange in that position but otherwise I think it is very good. I would say it is a pretty good score for being so out of the box but then again it is a semi nude:) good job.
I assume this is a work in progress, as there is very little color with work done on the back. I like the lighting and the background but her upper hip breaks the contour of the body. Perhaps if her legs were straightened some it would help continue the flow.