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07/11/2006 05:50:40 PMPost actions
I like the composition and idea.
I think you used narrow DOF to focus on the letter, but the pen is distracting me. I think if it had been in focus, it wouldn't do that. Go figger.
As for the paper itself, it's not quite bright enough. I get the impression of someone writing this in a very dim room.
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07/11/2006 03:01:53 PMPost actions
Great photo - but it would have had even more impact if the words were actually written in handwriting instead of being a printed card..or was it?
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07/11/2006 07:53:30 AMPost actions
Actually, this shows a beautiful piece of stationery, that is undoubtedly tied to an unfortunate event. the photo itself isn't the clearest, but it clearly conveys a message.
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07/10/2006 08:25:43 AMPost actions
Wondering if the image would have been improved by also having the pen in focus?
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07/08/2006 03:43:34 PMPost actions
Would have liked to see more balanced framing on this with less of the table above, and some showing below.
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07/07/2006 05:19:35 PMPost actions
nice idea, but needs more. casket in the background, etc. to make it really click.
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07/07/2006 03:16:41 PMPost actions
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07/07/2006 09:21:51 AMPost actions
I would have liked to see the tip of the pen in focus with the paper. The composition is well thought out and overall, this is a very nice image.
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07/06/2006 08:47:02 PMPost actions
Nicely done, the pen set up the way you did is an added touch that adds to the interest.
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07/06/2006 07:59:25 PMPost actions
An increased DOF where the pen is in focus would be better. Nice idea.
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07/06/2006 01:44:05 PMPost actions
I like the idea in this photo. I think the pen should be sharper, and the paper should be aligned better. The pen to me is a major element of the photo--but it's a bit frustrating to have it so out of focus in the shot.
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07/06/2006 06:05:05 AMPost actions
Oh such a sad letter but a pretty design.
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07/05/2006 07:05:36 PMPost actions
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07/05/2006 03:19:20 PMPost actions
interesting shot for a stationary catalog...
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07/05/2006 10:29:55 AMPost actions
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07/05/2006 01:17:24 AMPost actions
good job! personally i would have liked the pen to be more in focus.
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