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11/18/2006 11:31:51 PMPost actions
Comments Made During the Challenge
07/11/2006 09:02:09 PMPost actions
a little too centered, would have liked to see a little more paper toward the top. Other than that, excellent. Great detail on the fingers.
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07/11/2006 08:34:17 AMPost actions
Oh, I just love calligraphy!!! It is only slightly off the subject of the challenge though. Alas.
07/10/2006 07:51:49 AMPost actions
I would have prefered the page half written, but then again it is a great tech picture. WEll done
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07/09/2006 05:47:45 PMPost actions
07/08/2006 10:23:54 PMPost actions
07/08/2006 08:46:12 PMPost actions
It would have gotten higher marks from me if the pen didn't blend in with the background.
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07/07/2006 04:55:25 PMPost actions
Great shot! Love the contrast in BW.
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07/07/2006 09:18:07 AMPost actions
The tip of the pen is tack sharp and well positioned. The hand appears to have ink on it, which doesn't translate to the paper itself. I would expect to see smudging on the paper since he is resting his hand on top of ink that transferred to his hand.
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07/06/2006 08:32:40 PMPost actions
Lighting could be improved. Too contrasty for my tastes.
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07/06/2006 06:52:33 PMPost actions
The black of the pen blends in well with the background. You might get some flames thrown your way because of that, but I kind of like it. 9
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07/06/2006 06:10:12 AMPost actions
Nice tones and great details.
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07/06/2006 03:46:19 AMPost actions
The lighting and angle seem to work against this image.
07/05/2006 07:47:03 PMPost actions
Nice mooody use of light and dark. Well framed, too; though I would have experimented with having the paper at a bit more of an angle.
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07/05/2006 07:37:02 PMPost actions
Nice if a little faux. 8.
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07/05/2006 06:51:05 PMPost actions
I love that you opted to shoot this in black and white.
It adds character that I think would have been lost in color.
Gives the feel of age.
Beautiful use of lighting and focus as well.
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07/05/2006 02:10:57 PMPost actions
i like the grittiness of it. the high contrast b&w makes it all the better!
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07/05/2006 11:24:09 AMPost actions
Wonderful focus, the highlight on the thumbnail keeps attracting my eye though... 7
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07/05/2006 09:08:40 AMPost actions
lighting is quite harsh and contrasty, sorry
07/05/2006 12:39:51 AMPost actions