Interesting effect with the light but the composition leaves something to be desired for me. I might try to fine another angle or something to shoot this place again.
Cool idea and cool fountain, but nothing is in very sharp focus and the light sources seem a little overexposed. Perhaps a shorter exposure would help?
lacks focus. I do like the idea of the water looking like jets of light. The girl in the background takes away from the photo. Too much negative space on teh right side.
if person wasnt totally hidden, if something was in better focus, either water of person...then you would have something here. I realize water is 'frozen' but not sharp. i think a tripod would have solved that.