I like the originality of this flower shot. The light swirls add great interest. The lighting on the flower is ok, but I would enjoy a little more light on the top to show more detail of the petals.
Interesting idea, the concept is good. I think for it to work you'd have to have better light on the flower; as it is, it get's almost lost in the dark.
Unfortunately, for me, the light overpowers and steals the show. The flower appears a bit to soft and dark to compete and state "I am the subject". A very nice concept however.