I can see where you were going with this shot, and man, I wish you'd gotten there.
Instead I think you've over-sharpened and then over-blurred it. (Not sure how, but anyway...) The grass is hopelessly over-sharpened, and all of the grey in the image is very blurred. Plus, the file was heavily compressed to cause all of those jpeg jaggies. Try to keep your images as close to the 150Kb limit as you possibly can.
Better luck next time...
The processing of this image is cool. The only thing that distracts me are the mistakes around the edges. I'm not trying to be mean I promise! I have the same issues a lot of times. I just wanted to let you know in case you find it helpful to know. The image quality is perfect with respect to sharpness. I like the colors you've chosen, too.