would of liked to of seen more light on this shot, there is quite a bit of it in focus and it would of been nice to have all those areas a bit brighter.
Would have worked better if the paint went on into the distance, rather than being chopped off by a ragged black background. You can fake that sort of thing by painting short wide shapes on the far side and curving the page up, but be careful about changes of light in the curve giving the illusion away.
i think this would have been really nice with some more even lighting and no horizon line across the top of the image... A little more downward angle on this shot from a slightly higher vantage point would remove the horizon and probalby give you better depth of field as well... = 5 - jmsetzler
I don't know what is drawing me to put my hands into this cacaphony of color but I must resist!! the forground should be the sharp part of this picture.
jackson pollock, jr.? I think the light is a bit low and maybe a smaller area covered would have worked better for this shot. last but not least: go to the file size limit to get better results. 4 beegee