A nice play on words. The hand needs more light on it to better convey your intent. It would also help if the background didn't have such a strong light source, as it draws my eyes away from the intended focus point of your entry.
your subject is a little too dark and washed out by the highlights in the background, however, the modern equivelent of stationery is not something that even popped into my mind, points for originality
Whist I'm prepared to sort of accept your interpretation of stationery, this shot itself is too dark, not all that well composed and simply not very interesting to look at. Sorry.
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