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07/11/2006 05:55:49 PMPost actions
Beautiful shapes.
But not sharp enough, and not enough contrast. Try it against a black background.
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07/11/2006 08:42:08 AMPost actions
Nice composition and lighting. Very graceful and simple overall.
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07/10/2006 01:34:31 PMPost actions
I would have liked to see more contrast.
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07/10/2006 12:58:27 PMPost actions
Nice, imo could use a bit more contrast so the shadows on the paper jump out more but overall really nice
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07/09/2006 10:00:22 PMPost actions
Image is a little flat like the idea.
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07/07/2006 05:39:38 PMPost actions
i really like the way the paper looks here but something in the pencil bothers me... is this converted to blk & white by any chance?
perhaps without the pencil it would have been better because its somewhat imposing on something delicate and ruins the vibe , IMO. still nice though.
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07/07/2006 05:17:48 PMPost actions
nice idea and choice of coloring.
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07/07/2006 03:19:02 PMPost actions
The paper looks like the Sydney Opera House ;-) Overall, nice shot, good contrast between the paper and pencil, although there could be stronger contrast between the paper and bg.
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07/07/2006 09:29:29 AMPost actions
This image really needs to be a bit more high key to make it work. The lines are very pleasing but I do not fully understand why the pencil is there.
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07/06/2006 08:45:51 PMPost actions
Nice idea, but the lighting is much too flat.
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07/06/2006 06:09:19 AMPost actions
Nice idea and clean image.
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07/05/2006 10:12:50 PMPost actions
Nice but could use some contrast perhaps?
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07/05/2006 09:15:13 PMPost actions
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07/05/2006 08:25:30 PMPost actions
A great composition. Maybe needs just slightly better focus, and some more emphatic contrast in the paper.
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07/05/2006 07:03:03 PMPost actions
Very simplistic and creative
I however tend to lose the paper against the white background.
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07/05/2006 03:20:49 PMPost actions
interesting...obscure, but interesting
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07/05/2006 01:27:26 PMPost actions
Would like to have seen this a little sharper, nice composition
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07/05/2006 09:04:58 AMPost actions
Well lit but I can't help thinking that adding at least one color may have made more of an impact. 7
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07/05/2006 07:29:25 AMPost actions
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07/05/2006 05:06:37 AMPost actions
Just needs a darker background IMO.
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