I feel it's a bit too grainy, although I realize it's candlelight. I also don't like the perspective too much. It gives off the feeling the pic is crooked. I think it's because of the mirror frame.
The blown out shoulder is a bit distracting as well is the graininess of the photo as a whole, but shooting in the dark with a minimal light source tends to do that.
Doesn't work for me. a large blown out section is in the front, and the candle (even though it really doesn't) has the apearance of hiding the face. Lowering the candel and puttin more light on the face would have helped. Also maybe a tighter crop on the left 2/3s of the image.