I think the lighting on this photo is good as well as the idea. One thing that strikes me as odd is the way his hands are posed, maybe if he was handing the rose out then the viewer might feel even more involved with the photo.
Funky contacts? In my unexperienced opinion the creativity and photography are good, but it needs a little more post-processing to darken the little distractions in the background and bring the subject into sharper contrast, make him stand out terribly evilly :)
This is good, but I think it would have had more impact if the face was more of a focal point - the hands do add to the image, but are somehow distracting at the same time.
Well hes definately creeeeeeeeeepy. but the noise and those images in the background(square off to the left and vertical lines on the right) take alot away from this.
Not dramatic enough for me. Doesn't sell that he is a vampire. Also the rose is hidden, would be nice to make the flower pop a little. Maybe with its own pen light or such. Fangs would have been a nice touch as well.