Technical: Focus - 1
Exposure- 1
Quality - 1
Aesthetic: Comp. - 1
Light - 1
Color - 1
Wow factor: 1 for what I think is perfect composition of the image. Nice job.
Personal tilt: 2/3
What I like: The composition is AWESOME in my opinion
What I didn't like: image might look better with just a tad less orange/yellow.
I have never heard of unlucky make-up, but I'm perfectly happy to take your word for it. I love the colors and the action in this photo. The person in the background would normally be too distracting, but in this case, s/he adds to the atmosphere.
I've never heard of unlucky make up but I'll trust you. Very sharp and focused. would be nicer to see the makeup being applied(see the face more). beautiful colors.