I would prefer the area of refletion and the area where we see through the object were clear of mist as to give it a nice crisp quality but overall nice idea and composition.
Oe I love the background with the waterdrops of your entry! the blue thingie doesn't do much for me, it feels like it's standing in the way of the grey, black and white lines in the background.
I am guessing that you sprayed water on a mirror for the background effect. This mirror image of each drop caused the shot to look like it is very much out of focus when in fact it is not. I think larger water drops would help improve this a lot.