LOL. Nice capture indeed. The only thing holding this back from an even higher score is the background, IMO. The right side of the background is more uniform and had it looked like that throughout it would have provided a nice backdrop. Beyond that I'm not sure what else to tell you to improve. I really like the angle here with the tilt. That alone makes me visualize how this bird is trying to lift the bread. Also, good detail with the subjects and the DOF works nicely.
A lovely shot. The sense of "turbulence" around the wings is great.
My first reaction was that I would have cropped it more tightly. But on reflection I think youve got it right. The sparrow looking on has creates just the right sense of "oh, I wanted some of that!".
great capture! Technically the bread is a little overexposed and the motion of the wings is somewhat lost in the background, but your timing is perfect!