I'm trying to figure out what significance the pencil has. The eraser area looks funny and is distracting with the blob over the metal and below the eraser.
Point is clearly made with this one and I think most of us have been there. The lighting does seem a little bright (at least I've never been in a classroom that bright). Have the studio lights melted the eraser on the pencil? :)
I like the idea and the composition. :) The detail on the fingers is awesome! The only thing I can point out is that it seems a bit too bright and maybe needed a slight levels adjustment.
I'm not a huge fan of the composition on this one. It might have helped to show the entire hand. The image is also very "bright" and the paper seems almost blown out.
Brings back nightmares.
The pic is a bit blown out, but I think this was the effect you were after.
I used to be able to do these problems easily back then. Now, I wouldn't know where to begin.
this would be great if the lighting were a little less harsh and that pencils eraser wasnt messed up. the eraser is quite distracting. nice concept though.
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