Two things I think could have gotten you closer to 6.
1) Less centered. So that means zoom back and leave some negative space on one side (likely the right in this shot).
2) Change the composition to reveal more of the "cup" of the flower. Doesn't have to be all the way, but I feel like we want more.
The bokeh is nicely done, especially for a P&S. The lighting is nice. The colors are nice too, although I think the greens look just a tad dull. I'd have to goof in PS though to see how to improve that. |
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