It's a good concept, but I think you could have done a couple things to make this a little stronger. The image is overall very flat from a lighting standpoint. There's not a lot of contrast. I might have tried inching the camera up a little bit, and eliminating the very end of the board. And it might have been cool to have the first couple numbers in focus, leading to a fuzzy background, rather than having a couple random numbers in focus. Again, it's a nice idea -- you might toy with this concept a little more :)
Good idea, but seems a tad out of focus to me. Black and white is a good choice, but could definately use some tweaking on the contrast to make things pop a bit more.
The tape almost disappears in this image lacking much needed contrast. It's also very grainy and unsharp. Was the camera sitting on the floor? Maby turning on the lights would have helped? The end of tape was probably too close to the lens to get good focus. Or your DOF was shooting for further on the tape. The blurry front distracts from the rest of the image. The perspective and point of view are interesting.
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