The leaning water tower is a bit disconcerting - looks like it could fall over at any time! (And yes, I know it's a lens distortion thing or something like that.) It does look desolate, though.
I'm not seeing any real focal point other than the water tower, but you couldn't have meant that as your main subject or it wouldn't be almost missed in the shot? I'm not meaning to sound harsh, I'm merely explaining what I see as one reason you may not be scoring as well as you'd like :)
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