I keep coming back to this one - I do like the subject choice, but I think it suffers compositionally from the split frame - ie the horizon at the midpoint of the frame. It may be better with the rule of thirds applied.
Intersting subject matter and qualifies as desolate. I'm not excited by this though. Maybe a more dramatic angle highlighting a segment of the building rather than this rather straightforward point of view? I think if there were some sort of figure in the foreground, a dog, or cat perhaps, or maybe some abandoned object, this view would work more for me. The expanse of patchy grass doesn't make enough of an impact to me.
This is a great location for photos. Barring savage guard dogs, I would have cut in for a closer series of photos from which to select on or more for processing. The foregorund needs a bit of cutting here.
I think my only comment on this one is that it could have been a 10 in my book by having the subject straiter in frame. That is just me though, and I think you did a great job capturing desolation.
Very good, needs something in the foreground to balance the image. Maybe that old fridge.freezer over by the front could have been dragged across the grass!
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