Thank you all for the comments. After I submitted this one, I regretted, but it was after deadline, so I thought I'd ride it out - since I did not want DQ just for that.
This is the last time I will do a desparate attempt at a challenge, rather pass it than just throw something in to see what happens.
Focus was rathere good in the original, don't know what happened in the PP, but there are no real desolated areas around here, except junkyards maybe!
comp needs work, nice lines, duotone interesting, power lines distracting, light poles distracting, blacks a bit too deep, whites not there, light could be better, dof ok but a bit blurred in bg.