I really like the emotiveness of this. strong pose and composition.I like that you added the mountains and the sky. It gives a true "sense" of who it is hes yelling at. I think the added "speckles" hurt this image quite a bit. I would love to see the orginal. also for the dark shadow on the side of his face i would suggest using a flash set to "fill" to help lighten that spot up a bit.also If you up the #'s on your apeture it will help bring the blue of the sky into the photo. that would also help the highlights on your models arm to not be so overexposed. hope this helps.