There is almost no detail in this image, which makes it not interesting to look at. If you had an interesting sky and a silluette, than that would be different sotry, but this one is kind of flat. The perspective isn't bad.
This is interesting. If you hadn't titled it High Jack, I wouldn't have known there could be a jack this big. I really like the way you set up this shoot. The black and gray colors work with this one.