I don't actually like the white lines, but I really love this image. I like how they are placed and the silence it creates.
I don't know why you added the lines. I am sure you were thinking of something with a good reason, but I don't understand it.
Not that it should matter what I think, but, how about removing the white lines and make the frame bigger with more black? Like they are in this huge room, totally dark, and lost is whatever they are doing. In a very big room, yet close together, sharing something and create this frozen patch of time?
Thought I'd share my thougths with you :)
Message edited by author 2006-06-18 19:58:34. |