This has the potential to be a really nice image, but it is pixilated which probably occurred when you resized. There is a tutorial about resizing for dpc, please read it and don't give up.
Your photo is very grainy and pixilized. Im not sure if it has to do with the compression or something else. Im sorry, at this point I can only offer up observation and not so much suggestion.
I think you went a little too heavy on the compression or something and lost some crucial quality. (the blotchy pixelation areas on the paper) Good concept and composition though.
Check the "quality" setting in the "Save for Web" window... As far as the picture goes, this would, in my opinion, benefit from a slightly lower angle.