2 - Possibly here a more shallow dof may have helped, especially seeing as the subject is so close to the 'frame'. Overall a bit 'snapshottish', yet can see the concept, just the set up, including 'technicals' (workarounds required if p&s), make this much better in my opinion. Maybe b&w could have given this a little extra, who knows.
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