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Nice choice of subject, and the sharpness and colour are good, but I think the image would be stronger if there was a bit of a sense of action. Instead of the three occupants staring straight to camera (with not particularly excited looks on their faces), it would be good to see them *enjoying* the indulgence - interacting with each other, putting on the life jackets, or just starting/coming to a stop (i.e. with some bow waves or wake to show movement) would all have dramatically improved the image. |