I like this image and am fond of how the lines in the shed distort the areas of the shadow. I also think the use of open space was a nice touch. The tones are pleasing as well.
I guess what I would critique would be just a few small points. The shadows to the right and left of the subject are a bit distracting. For an image like this to really pop you want to see the color or background lead right up to the model's shadow. The other thing I'd like to mention is the very top right corner. While it is not a huge distraction I think it could've been cropped out.
Overall a great shot!
Thanks for the opportunity to critique this photo Shannon!
The background is a nice colour and the tone is great. My only suggestion would have been to have the model more central and compose the photo around a frace profile and the body frontal dancing with (important) the iPod cable clearly visible (which it is not in this photo). The top of this photo is not contributing enough to the image.
Challenge: SHADOWS III
Description: Creatively capture a shadow Advanced Edit
Peter Pan Meets iPod
Fit: Epitomises the idea behind the challenge 2
Like this one a lot
Aesthetics: Well composed, aesthetically pleasing 2
Not sure where the iPod comes in though
Technical: Technically well executed 2
This would work better, IMHO, if the pattern of lines in the background was more consisten. Also, there are two distracting "near-shadows" in the bottom.
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