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No offense to your retake but I kinda like the original better. I do like how you fixed the tilt in the building but the overall "feel" of the image was better in the original, IMO. For example, the curve in the building was more curvy. The original had the curves converges at the top and swoop down giving it more of a curve. In the retake it's more spread apart from top to bottom and you lose that flowing aspect somewhat. Also, in the original the walls were a lot smoother. In the retake the rough texture is more prominent. I also like how you included the light posts in the orignal. Now maybe that was all done to fix the tilt (by taking a different angle) however, I'd rather see you fix the tilt in post rather than lose extra elements of the scene in this particular case. Now don't get me wrong, the retake is good. I just like the original better. |
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