Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Your focus is very crisp and your depth of field works very well for this image. You captured excellent detail in the foreground and nicely faded into a blurred background.
Lighting: This one looks like it was lit with a flash. If that was the case, your settings were a bit too high. The harsh flash burned some pretty harsh shadows underneath the burned twigs and threw in some highlights that lost a little detail here and there.
Composition/Content: I like the composition that you set up. The positioning of the twigs work well to draw the viewer's eye deep into the frame,
My Opinion: I do like this one much better than your original entry, as did the voters. Nice work on improving an idea.
Eric
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