Okay, it looks older now but, I know, those horrible buts, I'm turned off by the tilt of the shot. I keep thinking the jeep is going to roll back down the hill, but that's probably just me. It is an improvement over the original as far as what you were trying to convey (making it look like an older shot) but still lacks a punch, maybe a slight contrast bump or levels adjustment? Also, the lack of focus or soft focus also doesn't work for me on this shot, but again, just my opinion. If I had voted on the original it would have gotten a 5, this one gets a 7 for improving what you wanted to convey and a nice feel to the shot overall.
It took me a while to find your original - it's in Something Old II, not Something Old...
Anyway, you definately met the challenge here. You took the recommendations in the comments and applied them. The light is much better than the original.
Since you deemed my comment on your Take One as not worthy of being useful, why bother on this one I wonder. However, IMO it does say Something Old better than Take One.
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