well, don't know why you did it, you must have expected a ton of DNMCs, but maybe you were just going for the comments? welp, I would say that I like the pink background and the softness... even the wrinklyness of the fabric would be ok to me if she weren't pushing it around with her body (feet, arms, etc) does that make sense? if not, let me know, I'll try to clarify. I like the framing, at least knowing that this was intended as a portrait, not a DPC pic, you might try the third line thing, but sometimes I think that rule is over-rated. also, that necklace looks familiar to me and I'm guessing it had meaning to her and that she probably doesn't take it off or at least especially isn't going to take it off for pictures, I think it looks finel
Other than that, she's very pretty and I think that this shoot of yours turned out pretty good.
It looks like it's not on topic, it dosnt show the empty room. Though the picture is nicely procesed, I wouldn't make it so soft (too much neat image?).
Well, this is a real stretch for an empty room challenge. I have to say that this one lost me for this particular challenge. Beyond that, the blur effect is a hair too strong, and the large shadow cast by her right breast is distracting. Very nice exposure and tones, though. Nice shot for a different challenge.
the image and concept is good, but the focus is a little soft. She is a lovely model btw ... but I think that if you look again the shadow below her breast is a bit unflattering .... and only emphasises soze ... if you know what I mean. :)
Not seeing the empty room, just a wrinkly pink sheet with a cute model. I must say the first thing my eye focused on was the necklace hanging down, if you want to shoot nice portraits little details like that have to be considered, I think the viewer's eye should be drawn to their eyes and face first.
This challengge required an empty room - no evidence of that here. The model should take up less space - using a thirds line - of the frame and the room needs to be shown.
Hey. . .I just saw this pretty girl in the recently uploaded photos :) Now I get a chance to actually bless this awesome photo with a high score. Great job. I really like her against those soft pinks!
Pretty model. I like the glamour filter this appears to have had applied. I haven't shot many studio shots, but from what I have done it took a lot of space - so I am gonna assume the room you set up in was empty.
This might have been taken in an empty room, but it has more of a studio feel to it, and doesnt really convey the theme. I like the soft focus you used in this portrait though.
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