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06/13/2006 08:18:00 AMPost actions
too bad about the lens flare in the upper left, without that this would have been a beautiful shot!
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06/13/2006 07:52:56 AMPost actions
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06/13/2006 04:56:53 AMPost actions
The light wash in the top left corner is distracting. Could also do with a bit more contrast.
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06/12/2006 03:25:37 PMPost actions
Good concept.. I think the colours can be improved vastly and the sadness of the whole theme could be changed with the light effect. The daylight coming from behind needs to be minimized and picture should be manipulated to feel that a single source is coming down on it. I'm sure you can make it better
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06/10/2006 09:53:08 PMPost actions
Usually I say fill the frame, but in this case, I'd say back off a bit and include more background. You're trying to show this near antique in the loft of a barn. Including more background will give more feel to it. Maybe some sunbeams with dust floating, give it try and post the result.
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06/10/2006 07:02:19 PMPost actions
I think the subject had a lot of potential. The hazy lighting caused some problems for you on this one.
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06/09/2006 08:30:16 PMPost actions
Top left hand corner is distracting, I like photo though
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06/09/2006 04:57:11 PMPost actions
A slight lessen on brightness may have help to reduc the flaring on the left top of the image.
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06/09/2006 02:40:12 PMPost actions
there is some kind of red cast at the top left corner
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06/09/2006 11:23:54 AMPost actions
this could be very cool in b&w and move back a bit so we can get some sense of environment
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06/08/2006 01:46:35 AMPost actions
i find the light coming in at the top a little distracting, and als the garbage around the bottom at the front. great find, though.
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06/07/2006 06:23:34 PMPost actions
Interesting subject, but not capture very well imo. Lighting, composition could be improved.
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06/07/2006 12:55:46 PMPost actions
Cool image. The lensflair, though, is distracting for me.
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06/07/2006 08:50:46 AMPost actions
This picture and location have so much potential ... and I don't think you have taken advantage of it.
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