I see what the idea is, but something is missing. I think the lighting should either make the color pop, or there need to be some more elements here to provide more visual appeal. The composition is pretty static too, basically, just a line through the middle of the frame. That could work, but it really doesn't here
Nice composition here. The white space above and below help the watermelon stand out and help emphasize its colors. It would be better if the entire subject was in focus and the shadows were eliminated (especially the ones in the corners).
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