Hey there from the Critique Club
This capture is definitely better than the original entry, but it is still far too small. Try [url=//www.dpchallenge.com/tutorial.php?TUTORIAL_ID=26 ]THIS LINK[/url]. I think that it will help you pull much higher scores on future challenges. I can see that there is a tremendous amount of detail in this capture, but I cannot see where the main focus is located, I cannot determine how deep the depth of field is, nor can I get a good enough feel for the lighting to give an adequate critique. Always, always, always take advantage of the full dimension parameters that DPC allows. Read through that tutorial. I believe you will be happily surprised with your next entry.
Eric
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