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06/07/2006 07:19:32 PMPost actions
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Nice hair :-) I really like this shot. Nice detail in the hair and the angle makes it look wild. Almost like the hair is a flame.
Composition:
Works well. I love that the face is located at the very bottom of the photo. The hair leads my eye to it.
Subject:
clear, stands out well with nice detail.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: Nice warm tone to it. I'm sure the 500 watt (probably halogen) light source helped with that.
Focus is sharp, looks nice. I do see some details in the hair that looks like you may have over-sharpened in post or perhaps it's jpeg compression artifacts.
Light: nicely done.
To grow its vote?:
Nudity? Really, I'm not sure how to grow the vote on this one.
Summary:
Awesome shot, nice finish. Congrats.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
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06/07/2006 02:00:32 PMPost actions
Congratulations on your 6th place, excellent shot!
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06/07/2006 12:55:19 AMPost actions
Love the effect but the border squeezes too hard
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Comments Made During the Challenge
06/06/2006 10:30:52 PMPost actions
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06/06/2006 09:34:32 AMPost actions
I really like this, I think if she was perfectly centered it would have worked better
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06/06/2006 07:58:24 AMPost actions
the eyes... are captivating, wish it wasn't quite so dark so I could see more of the hair
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06/06/2006 01:12:51 AMPost actions
I find this photo very unsettling.
And very well done -- one of the shots that stand out in this challenge.
Yeah.
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06/05/2006 05:35:50 AMPost actions
hair like fire! wonderful shot...gorgeous face and eyes 9
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06/05/2006 04:30:08 AMPost actions
06/04/2006 11:02:08 PMPost actions
beautiful eyes, great layout and nice blend of light and shadows. good work I really like the image
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06/04/2006 07:24:36 PMPost actions
Like the shot and high contrast. The warm light works well here. Thats a beautiful model with lovely hair. It does seem a little soft though. I wish her hair was tack sharp. 7
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06/03/2006 05:58:40 PMPost actions
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06/03/2006 03:07:16 PMPost actions
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06/02/2006 07:11:14 PMPost actions
Nothing else to say really...Beatiful! One minor nitpick, since her left ear is out of view might have darkened the right one too.
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06/02/2006 04:35:48 PMPost actions
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06/02/2006 08:29:14 AMPost actions
Nice, conttolled lighting,9
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06/01/2006 07:10:05 AMPost actions
it looks like her eyes have set the whole image on fire. Amazing shot
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06/01/2006 03:13:46 AMPost actions
Very nice use of lighting - really brings out the highlights of the hair. Sharp focus and good details.
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05/31/2006 11:04:30 PMPost actions
nice shot, hot girl haha good job man
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05/31/2006 09:53:31 PMPost actions
Great idea. It kinda looks like a large flame.
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05/31/2006 08:44:27 PMPost actions
I like the flame look of the hair... gives a goddess look ;) Very nice :)
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05/31/2006 07:29:52 PMPost actions
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05/31/2006 06:58:51 PMPost actions
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05/31/2006 03:05:35 PMPost actions
Beautiful girl - perfect lighting.
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05/31/2006 09:36:52 AMPost actions
wow how wonderfull deffinetly love this!
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05/31/2006 09:24:13 AMPost actions
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05/31/2006 08:43:56 AMPost actions
I ike the composition here. Wonderful.
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05/31/2006 05:03:14 AMPost actions
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05/31/2006 04:34:12 AMPost actions
Golden Light. Golden Girl. Golden work of master. Hope they give you special golden ribbon. Goodluck. 9.
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05/31/2006 01:18:40 AMPost actions
Cool shot, the whites of the eyes have been overprocessed though. Way too white to be natural looking.
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05/31/2006 12:44:22 AMPost actions
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