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Birthday greetings, bottle of wine
Birthday greetings, bottle of wine
snaffles


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Challenge: Beatles Song/Lyrics (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Samsung Digimax 201
Location: Ontario
Date: May 29, 2006
Aperture: default
ISO: default
Shutter: default
Galleries: Still Life, Rural
Date Uploaded: May 29, 2006

 The line is from 'When I'm 64'.

This shoot was done quite quickly due to the presence of giant Ontario mosquitoes trying to carry me off!

No post-shoot editing.

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Place: 186 out of 273
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Views during voting: 360
Votes: 271
Comments: 4
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Nikon Z7II
Nikon NIKKOR Z 24-120 f/4 S
 06/09/2006 02:42:54 AM
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Everything in your frame is nicely focused. Your colors are spot on, this your chosen white balance is also on.

Lighting: You chose a great time of day for this capture. Your lighting produced a very peaceful feeling with great highlight and mild shadows.

Composition/Content: The composition is a bit too busy and feels too crowded for my personal taste. I think composing this one without the blue envelope or the glass on the left would have loosened it up a great deal.

My Opinion: Terrific job meeting the challenge, and with a slight composition change, this one would have scored much higher.

Eric
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
Canon EOS-5D
Canon EF 50mm f/1.4 USM
 06/02/2006 05:06:58 PM
mmm looks good.
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Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Sigma 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 Macro
 05/31/2006 11:52:28 PM
The glasses probably should have been left out. They add too many reflections and shadows. they also seem to cram the sides, like you were trying to fill the frame. The shot appear to be well focused with a very good DOF. It fits the challenge well.
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 05/31/2006 06:07:31 PM
There are seven bits of stuff here - and I don't think the idea really needs more than two; simplifying would help, but there's little sense of shape to your arrangement of those objects either.
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