He looks hungry, is that why they keep him in the cage? I love the expression and I like the way the facial features are not compromised by the fence. Good color & clarity. It does have some artistic qualities to it, but I don’t think I would buy it to display it unless he was my child.
Do you always keep this kid in a cage, or was it only after he lost his right hand? :P A clean face tends to up the vote and being on the same side of the fence might help. good try. 3 cthenk
I'd crop a little tighter, esp. off the bottom. Or you could crop into a vertical frame. Pretty good job framing the anatomical details in the holes in the fence; could maybe be a little lighter and sharper.
I like the expression on his face and the fact that you took it from his eye level (or just below). It may be cropped a little too closely at the top, and it seems kinda flat to me.
This came out a little too snapshotish for me (not a bad thing). If you could have gotten an angle that had foliage where we see house in the lower right, I think that would have helped a lot. The lines of the fence are very promising and the expression on his face is priceless :) Also the crop is kind of close to the top of his head. This could have benefited from the "rule of thirds" as well. Look in the forums to a great link that JM put up. Your lucky to have access to such a great model :) ~Qyl~
Snapshots of kids arent that visually interesting, unless you have an emotional attachment to the kids. Next time, maybe show the subject in such a way that conveys your emotions about him orher.
Well Tyler, with the look on your face i'm glad you're on the other side of that fence. Looks like this snapshot has a slight blue ting, was it an overcast day? Try fideling with white balence if your camera has this feture, or play with a touch of red/green in post processing.
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