When I look at the picture I can't really associate it with success. Composition is ok but it lacks any emotional values - maybe if the lighting was different? I don't know but for me it's just a picture of a grave yard...
/KUBA:)
I like your general concept for your composition but I think if you eliminated the grass in the foreground you might have a more dramatic photo. The trees in the background seem a bit underexposed and create a dark mass and have a tendency to be a distraction. I think all these issues are an easy fix with post processing so I think you have the material for a strong photo.