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Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very ole worldy. kinda a cool concept.
Composition:
A little more cropping on the right would have moved the little girl into the thirds line nicely and not detracted from the shot. The hill creates a lovely leading line for the eye to follow.
Subject:
Well the title meets the challenge ... but i am not sure the picture could stand on its own.
Technical (Colour and light):
lovely sepia tonings and natural light. The picture is a little soft focus on the kids though.
To grow its vote?:
There are a couple of things ... crop tightly on the kids to include less of the shed but have it peeking at the right of the shot ... this would have created a focus on the kids and their holding of the bible.
Also think about how the shot stands without the title itself.
Summary:
Good shot .. and lovely image well done.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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