::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
You are so right ....I think this is a great out of the box shot.
Composition:
The composition is fine .. the dirt track is almost on thirds and the top of the cages are working towards that are well.
Subject:
So what ... success is self determined .. .and starting is always a good place to begin.
Technical (Colour and light):
your aperture you included in your comments it is the f stop information so is 3.8.
Colours are great and sharp for something with so much movement.
To grow its vote?:
Think about how others will see the image ... I think this is one from left field .. and for me that works .. for others they like to be spoon fed the normal type o stuff... you have a good eye use it.
Summary:
Great work for a first entry fantastic.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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