Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Everything appears nicely focused, and the colors work very well together to give a very nice feeling of failure.
Lighting: As I mentioned during the challenge, the background light of the sky is too strong. If the light were behind you, you'd have a much more powerful capture.
Composition/Content: You have a great composition started, but it still needs some work. The fence comes in and a terrific spot, but I'd like to see the building up and to the left more, getting it out of the center. As it is, the fence provides a great leading line, but just plops the eye into the middle of the frame with nowhere else to roam.
My Opinion: I think that you did a very nice job meeting the challenge. With some lighting and composition changes, this one surely would have scored higher.
Eric
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