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Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
This is a lovely image, seems a little too tightly cropped.
Composition:
The crop doesn't allow the rules to apply easerly .. I am not sure but it just doesn't seem to work well .. maybe working towards the rule of thirds would have helped in the circumstance .. do a google on this and see how that helps in recropping and positioning of the people in the frame.
Subject:
I think lots of people did not get/understand the success shown .. so got a littl of the DNMC ... but I think it meets the challenge fine.
Technical (Colour and light):
Not sharp enough .. you mentioned this .. I think that the border is a little too thick and creates a tightness on the image. I like the colours they are lovely and bright.
To grow its vote?:
Think about the rules of photography .. i am not at home so don't have my normal URLs to give .. but this may help in future ... do a google and have a look around.
Summary:
Good work .. keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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