Wow...now this I like. The eyes and the rough texture of the skin against the soft skin of the shoulders. The chain and the tat complete the image well...good work and good luck.
Strong image. I think that the placement off center is what makes it work. My only criticism is that my eyes are alwasy drawn to the lightest spot on the image. That leads me to your shoulders, when what I am really interested in is your face. I would enjoy seeing this image again with the lighting reversed.