In shop window with natural light. First sun in 2 week. I live in massachusetts and we have had rain for two weeks.
Settings according to light meater.
About six in the evening.
Model....
My wife
"Mysticred"....Gwen always a good sport
First picture entered using my new computer
Was using 1998 Gatway
Now a new,,,,,,, iMac
Kinda goes with pic
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First Impression - the most important one: Yay finally I get to critique a lenscap! When I first saw it I thought PIRATE .. but I am not sure what you were aiming for with the title?
Composition: Interesting composition .. may have worked with a little more face and a little more lescap ... not sure.
Subject: Meets the challenge ... and you have no problems with that.
Technical (Colour and light): natural light is great .. but totally unforgiving .. and that is an issue here. the eye lkooks great ... but the skin is quite reddened.
To grow its vote?: Think about how interesting the shot is to other people when you are taking it .. and especially when processing it ... changing to that thought may help.
Summary: Good work .. and great try.
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