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05/27/2006 10:13:05 PMPost actions
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
10.30 is late out for a kid this age ... good work - good on keeping him awake as well.
Composition:
Lovely I like this, worked the thirds of the pic nicely .. and the leading line of the body seems to work as well.
Subject:
Meets the challenge quite well.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lovely crisp colours .. I love the contours in the kids face .. they help to make this hot work.
To grow its vote?:
No idea sorry ... the top 30 in this challenge have me slightly baffled.
Summary:
Great work .. keep it up you are doing awesome.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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05/24/2006 11:18:34 AMPost actions
Nice work but I find the shadow from the ball a little odd
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05/22/2006 09:14:49 PMPost actions
I agree with Judy! This was one of my favorites! Fantastic work!!!
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05/22/2006 09:33:42 AMPost actions
You were robbed. This deserved top 5 for sure.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
05/21/2006 11:42:25 PMPost actions
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05/21/2006 01:08:35 AMPost actions
Great post processing as the child seems to be playing in a storm. nice comp, and tones.
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05/20/2006 06:18:22 PMPost actions
Amazing gaze on that boy. beautiful tones. haunting light. 8.
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05/20/2006 01:07:43 PMPost actions
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05/19/2006 04:49:25 PMPost actions
A clever title. I like the low viewpoint.
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05/18/2006 11:40:29 PMPost actions
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05/18/2006 11:37:59 PMPost actions
This one is really awesome! Great job!
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05/18/2006 11:22:48 PMPost actions
this is great. the sky looks awesome. the colors are amazing
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05/18/2006 03:46:42 PMPost actions
great photo! love the colouring and the lighting here! (8)
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05/18/2006 09:57:35 AMPost actions
Nice lighting and backround, somehow not really fond of the ball though, too big (close to the camera) and should not be so just barely out of focus, either totally out of focus or in focus has my vote. Rest of the image I like.
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05/17/2006 08:20:02 AMPost actions
well executed shot with dramatic colors
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05/17/2006 04:52:40 AMPost actions
doesn't sit with me seems unbalanced somehow
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05/16/2006 10:01:39 AMPost actions
really cool like the colors a lot and the focusing of the boy
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05/16/2006 08:59:08 AMPost actions
Excellent..... I love it.....
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05/15/2006 04:21:25 PMPost actions
Ahhh, very very good. It has a surreal look to it but it works. The lighting is strong and direct but that serves to isolate the subjects. I hope this does well
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05/15/2006 12:24:20 PMPost actions
Hey, that's a soccer ball! :P
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05/15/2006 09:35:27 AMPost actions
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05/15/2006 08:40:30 AMPost actions
I bed you are a good cook but dont over cook picture :) :)
05/15/2006 07:18:00 AMPost actions
amazing colors and composition. good luck
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05/15/2006 05:32:38 AMPost actions
stunning...no words to add...superb 10
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05/15/2006 12:57:07 AMPost actions
Really nice. Great colors. The perspective is good and I love the ball! Bravo.
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