The photograph is not the main offender, but an accomplice in this glossy, clean, expensive expansiveness, where anally obsessive tidiness deals neatly with death. Holiness?
Poor exposure (overexposed sky and dark foreground). I realize you were trying to catch the setting sun but perhaps shooting at a different time of the day would improve the photo.
Nothing really soars here. The sunset (or sunrise) is blown out so we don't get nice colors. The graves are too jumbled to get a sense of what is going on and the foreground is dark. I'm afraid I have to give it a 4.