I actually like the darkness of this one as it give it a ususual eerie feeling to the "magic" of the image.....I am not good at night shots, but if I did one like this, I would be over the moon.
unfortunately digital cameras tend to fade out colour and pixelate in dark conditions. I'd suggest a longer exposure and a bit of brightness and contrast tweaking to make this a winning shot. I like the colour though.
Not sure if you could have cloned the power lines out of the photo under basic editing, but if you could this would truely be a "magical" image. Well done!