I know this is the Bible but the angle of shot leaves it looking more like a newspaper. You lost all the depth of a book by not including the sides of the pages. Also, the text which is the focal point is out of focus. Keep shooting. I do like the subject matter.
I like this one because the text is all sharp. and the little rainbow that comes from "Esther" and comes to you. Don't know if that is what you wanted...but I like it. Great shot, hope you do well.
would love this to be focused better. the idea is great and the rainbow is a very nice touch, but whats going on in the upper left hand corner? polka dots? wallpaper? what is that? its distracting.