Good subject but the angle of attack (the lines) don't contribute to my appreciation of the photo. In some photos, tilting the angle enhances the composition but since you didn't shoot this straight on, the picture already has an odd feeling to the lines that appear to be running parallel to the ground. - 5
How about takeing this shot straight on instead of in an angle? and focus on the bars and windows. I think that might express your title more appropriately.