AWESOME shot. I love kinetic photography and have a few shots posted myself. This is great because of the sense of motion created by the angles of the lines - while there are a multitude of smaller shapes, they seem to be going in a similar direction.. and that helps give unity and focus to an abstract image.
Interesting photograph, but this one is very difficult to critique. I disagree with rick13601. It does NOT suck. It is a photo that typically doesn't do well in challenges here, but it doesn't suck. I do like the leading lines, and the light shapes that closely mimic each other do work to draw the viewer into and around the frame. To do well in these challenges, you need crisply-focused subjects with vibrant colors. Also, Neat Image seems to help out a lot. Don't be discouraged by lower scores and crappy comments. Some day that's the way the ball rolls. I read your posting in the forum earlier, and I agree that every comment is helpful. Welcome to DPC, I like your attitude, and I look forward to many more entries from you.